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One Day I was running in The Rain
Having all my Burdens and Pains
Unable to see as EvErything was Dark
I was Finding The way in the Light of spark
Cars were passing me side by side
I asked EvEryone, Can you Give Me a Ride...???
They Replied We Can't as This is All You Fate And
I was in Dilemma To Love Them or Hate
Tears On My Face were Mixing with Rain
All My Efforts were going in Vain
I Felt so fear and
I Felt alone
Pain Of Loneliness diffused in to bones
All Of a Sudden a Thought Warmth my brain
As a cup of Coffee in Acute Strain
I Closed My EyE's and Said OOooOH "ALLAH KAREEM !!!"
Shower Your Blessing's indeed You are "RAHEEM"
And what I saw when I Opened My EyE's
Believe !!! There was a Rainbow in Blue Skies
EvEryThinG Was Shining and Looking Bright
Is it Really Me who was Shivering with Fright?????
Yesss....!!!
It's Only "ALLAH" Who Gives us peace
With every hardship there is an ease.....!!!
Mirza, it is a lovely poem, thanks for sharing it with us.
Just for who doesn't know the meaning of some words here
Allah = god
Kareem= kind or generous
Raheem = Mercyful
Its all arabic words describ Allah
Thanks again Mirza
Night
Angela, Your good enough believe me, and also if any one is not good enough and is sharing his poems, others who are readers will help and tell their views in a polite developed way. True poems don't need to rhyme, poetry is imagination structured and painted by your pen which is a tool of your emotions and feelings that is off course came directly from your heart lightened by the inspiration of the moment, the situation and the event.
Angela, it is said that the tears are the weapon of the woman :) so it is useful after all !
I'm glad you liked Poetry and poetry group.
Night.
Angela, wow, it is really touching, and I am really happy you shared us your poems, Nonsense tears aren't Nonsense after all, cause you know what? it touches the heart and left a mark of mixed feelings and emotions that can't be slept again.It is very deep poem, and your voice reached our hearts.
I see a wise and talented poet here, Angela, Keep the good work!
Marvellous dear, I bet you have more poems in store :)
Angela Bechara said:
Nonsense tears
As I sat gazing upon the river
I tried to tile the stones of sorrow
I casted my eyes over the stream
And one tear drop was enough to spread the ripples of my anguish soul
I couldn’t find the answers
I couldn’t unveil the truth
I couldn’t capture the desires of the world
All I could do is shedding more tears
I tasted their bitterness
And I tried to decipher myself through them
I tried to figure out what my sorrows are made from
Only one question I ask
How come this deep malicious sorrow
Incarnate in such bitter and worthless liquid?
How come all our suppressed feelings inside are just a matter of mind?
How come the mind translate this sorrow into tears and cry?
How come this sweet voice of mine Is locked with this despondence inside?
A little prayer I ask
I little favor I seek
A little warmth I yearn for
I held my pillow
And I delved inside its warm fluffy cotton
Absolute stillness
And this is where I knew that living beings are lies
Living beings with freak contagious minds
I rested there
With my pillow in my hands
with my dreams that are awaiting me to fall asleep
I choose to dream
I choose to fly free from those freak minds
And I choose to love stillness of nature
Crops of heaven and
Voices of paradise
With reason I choose not to speak
I just spread these words
To make you open your eyes and delve inside your core
This is my voice reaching nowhere
Only my hands and notes..
As for me I always try to do what I decided cause if I wait and consider everything carefully I will definitely change my mind, so I try to do everything spontaneously... a nice poem Rathanam.
Rathanam said:
The world is created for us
The world is born for me
River is running for me,
Flowers are blooms for me
Green grass growing for my happiness
The floating moon is in the sky
it seems like a golden cart
lotus growing in the pond
It gives us pleasure to all.
it gives us pleasure to all
you and i why we born
we wont think whenever we alive
After we think, when the age has gone
what is the use to other
now it is good time ,
we must do what we think
dont be late to do you think
If you left it now , your mind will change soon
do it now , dont postpone
God will always with you
He gave you more blessings
he will always with you .
what is wonder
what is wonder in this word
you could not believe when you think
The world running with speed
Not degrece its moving
From my mothers womb
My heart is always beating
It is not stop anytime until death
The air is always not stop
From the creation of the earth
what is wonder , what is wonder
I could not believe in my life.
Replies
Title: My Dragon
Every time I close my eyes I see you, my dragon
You are a myth, but you came from no where
You lived inside me
You have killed all my doubts
My actions became yours
When I run I feel as if I'm flying like you
When I stand I feel as if I'm tall as you
My heart is the source of flames,
Like the one in your throat
Swords of humans can't cut me
Fear, I see it in their eyes
Confidence is now my language
In your strength I'm strong
Together lets ignite the world
And bring light to the heavy darkness
Having all my Burdens and Pains
Unable to see as EvErything was Dark
I was Finding The way in the Light of spark
Cars were passing me side by side
I asked EvEryone, Can you Give Me a Ride...???
They Replied We Can't as This is All You Fate And
I was in Dilemma To Love Them or Hate
Tears On My Face were Mixing with Rain
All My Efforts were going in Vain
I Felt so fear and
I Felt alone
Pain Of Loneliness diffused in to bones
All Of a Sudden a Thought Warmth my brain
As a cup of Coffee in Acute Strain
I Closed My EyE's and Said OOooOH "ALLAH KAREEM !!!"
Shower Your Blessing's indeed You are "RAHEEM"
And what I saw when I Opened My EyE's
Believe !!! There was a Rainbow in Blue Skies
EvEryThinG Was Shining and Looking Bright
Is it Really Me who was Shivering with Fright?????
Yesss....!!!
It's Only "ALLAH" Who Gives us peace
With every hardship there is an ease.....!!!
Just for who doesn't know the meaning of some words here
Allah = god
Kareem= kind or generous
Raheem = Mercyful
Its all arabic words describ Allah
Thanks again Mirza
Night
Regards
Night
Angela, it is said that the tears are the weapon of the woman :) so it is useful after all !
I'm glad you liked Poetry and poetry group.
Night.
I see a wise and talented poet here, Angela, Keep the good work!
Night.
Thanks for posting those nice poems,, enjoying and touching.
Night.
Angela Bechara said:
Rathanam said:
what is wonder in this word
you could not believe when you think
The world running with speed
Not degrece its moving
From my mothers womb
My heart is always beating
It is not stop anytime until death
The air is always not stop
From the creation of the earth
what is wonder , what is wonder
I could not believe in my life.