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  • In this kind of stream of consciousness writing who can say what is right or wrong?

  • I've written some previous sentences. Correct me if u can, please

  • - Will I live after death? Again Lola? The same? How terrible,- she said with a sigh. – But it’s senseless.

    - Who said your life had sense?

    In the blink of an eye the angel transformed into a sad person.

    - Endless circle … Spiral of Earth time has closed.

    Paying no attention to Lola, the angel kept walking, repeating to himself :

    - DNA spiral. Solar system moved on a spiral… Spiral galaxy… The same signs sprang up on every side.

  • "Endless circle" makes some sense and is understandable.

    "Spiral of Earth time closed" - I don't understand...

    What are you trying to say? Please put it in context.

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