Demo day

Friends below simple essay. i would like your feedback best way to write. 

      Today i am late to work and  very important day at work. giving product demo to stack holders.it took me 1 hour to reach the office  normally it took only 30 mins but their is a accident it took me 1 hour.my team already in conference room preparing for demo, i thank to my team members .stack holders happy about the product and given feed back.i took my team members to dinner with their support and help i cant finish the product.

Thanks,

Bud

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