Hello friends
I would like to share it once again with intention to let my new fellow know some negative sides of my beloved Country. As I have seen many people aggrandizing their country and cultures as if it is inhabited by angels :D
I posted this blog on on May 23, 2013
While surfing, I have come across this image, the idea came in mind to write a poem that may depict the situation as shown on this photo.
With my motherland all my emotion
Corruption broke the bone of nation
Government takes no stern action
Unfair wealth of whom in aggregation
yet with my motherland all my emotion
Sindhi, Balochi, Punjabi and Pathan
They all are good, but not one nation
Division of them causing destruction
yet with my motherland all my emotion
Islam condemns all discrimination
To serve mankind is clear instruction
Non-compliance leads to deterioration
Yet with my motherland all my emotion
So, need your attention
to share candid opinion
that makes satisfaction
is actually my intention
Thank you in advance
Comments
Wow you wrote your first blog on 21 May, 2013
Nice combination of words. Thank for being my friend
No persona this is my third ec acctt i deleted twice the first blog I posted Feb or March 2011. Anyway thank for the comment. Stay blessed and safe :)
Thank you once again for visiting here.
Ok, thanks. I think the first thing we should do is fixing the younger generation. But, it is almost impossible too. Maybe I will write something about corruption.
Onee-chan,
Correction is everywhere, but sadly to say that the most people stands to defend corrupt people of their countries. I think this is the main reason, it almost has been impossible to eradicate it from the root. The more you defend the evil, the more it spreads. Anyway, thank you so much for adding your valuable comments here. I really liked it!
Nimzaf, thank you so much for sharing your opinion.
Thank you so much sharing your thoughts. I feel glad :)
By the way, I, myself, use Internet via cellphone. I usually leave comments many typos. So, don't worry about that :)
arif saeed,,
You always have this style of making poem. Same diction.. Nice. I wonder since when you mastered English..
I like and concerned to this sentence: Corruption broke the bone of nation
I think you know that corruption are everywhere, mostly happened in every countries. It has done by group of people, year by year, continuously. Then it becomes tradition, can't be removed instantly. This is the era which we live in. An unfair feeling of so many people.
I wish we can live in the right way and stay honoring others... :)
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