After a hard month of studying, my family and I decided to go on a trip to refresh our brains. Spending 9 hours in a long way, we hired a house to stay in for 3 days. We all were ready to go to bed but suddenly my mother’s cellphone rang.

-shoot! Who it can be?!!

I have a cousin, called Zivar, a beautiful girl with a great sense of humor, who was going to marry on next week. But whole the situation immediately became upside down! She and her husband, saeed, were engaged for 2 years but he leaved her unbelievably, without any acceptable reason. He called Zivar an insane!!! He told that he figured it out when he saw her. It’s funny that he didn’t declare that in these 2 years!

Zivar loved Saeed crazily! She accepted to pay the half of the wedding party’s costs and supported her spouse in all the situations! She’d been adding his name to each of her sentences: I’ve been sick for a while saeed says if u don’t care…my skin’s color has changed but saeed says u still look lovely.

Saeed says he is in love with Zivar. But where his love has gone?! If he abandons Zivar according to her location and conventional cultures no one will marry her! Why did he do that? His action will mess her up! If he didn’t want to marry with her he could leave her at first! But why now? After 2 years?

Today, I see this disaster everywhere. We interchanged love with poor things! Boys like girls just because of their sex and girls do the same, too. PLEAZE wake up! LOVE is not the things which we recognize! Love is:

To consider a person as big as the world and consider the world as small as a person!

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  • It’s a sad story infect and my sympathy with your cousin don’t need to be disappointed God has a better one for her then saeed but these type of harsh stories we seen and heard everyday it’s a realties of this modern materialistic world. We all have to be careful there is no value of your emotion and feelings to other, everyone of us concerned our own happiness and wanted to fulfill our own desired we don’t care others feeling and emotions. In my opinion there is no place for true love in this world):
  • Why a girl must suffered the 'humiliation' of being jilted though it was not her fault? It's sad that this stigma is still widely practice by some community. Love is not the problem here, but rather the man who jilted the girl and the society who shunned the girl.

  • Nice topic and yes love hurts :( anyway, I would like to point out that it is also about the culture we live in. Sincerely, I am sad about the fact that as u said, now it will influence life of your cousin. Here nothing like this would happen, no reputation would be demaged. So I just hope one days refused girls won't suffer there like this :(
  • As you wish Maryam:  

    Here is the corrected version:

    After a hard month of studying, my family and I decided to go on a trip to refresh our brains.  After a long journey of 9 hours, we hired a house to stay in for 3 days. We all were ready to go to bed, but suddenly my mother’s cell phone rang.

    Shit! Who it can be?!!”

     

    I have a cousin, named Zivar, a beautiful girl with a great sense of humor, who was going to marry next week. But the whole situation immediately turned upside down! She and her fiance, saeed, were engaged for 2 years, but he left her unbelievably, without any acceptable reason. He called Zivar an insane!!! He told that he figured it out when he saw her. It’s funny that he didn’t say that in 2 years!

     

    Zivar loved Saeed crazily! She was ready to pay the half of the wedding party’s costs and supported him in all the situations! She’d been adding his name to each of her sentences:

     

    Saeed claimed to love Zivar very much, but now where his love has gone?! If he abandons Zivar, she will be ruined, because she won’t be able to get marry any one in her family,  according to her location and conventional cultures no one will marry her! It is considered in her culture very bad if a fiancé abandons a girl. How could Saeed do that to her? His action will mess her up! If he didn’t want to marry with her, why did he make engagement in the first place. It is done,  why now  he is betraying her after 2 years?

     

    I see this disaster everywhere. We interchanged love with poor things! Boys like girls just because of their sex and girls do the same, too. PLEASE wake up! LOVE is not the things which we recognize! Love is:

    To consider a person as big as the world and consider the world as small as a person!

     

  • good job

  • Of course Mishaikh I'll be happy if U do this!!!:-)
  • Yes, we shouldn't hurt our loved one.

  • @maryam

    Yes, love could be such a big problem. So many people are suffering a broken heart or being tortured so much by love. 

  • Great blog. You must have used Tag, because it do need corrections. Shall I do for you?
  • Touchy topic, touchy blog!

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