After reading EXPECTOR SMITH's blog ,I said why I donot try to write a blog about the world's.problem .So that I wrote this blog ,hoping him to correct my mistakes.Human Trafficking is a real problem that most of us ignore it , or simply donot know it.Human Trafficking is the trade of human for evil purpose as SEXUAL SLAVERY ,COMMERIAL SEXUAL EXPLOITATION FOR THE TRAFFICKER OR OTHERS ,FORCED LABOR,or even THE EXTRACTION OF ORGANS or TISSUES.Including SURROGACY(The carrying of a pregenancy for intended parents), as well as OVA REMOVAL(also called oophorectomy).Human trafficking can occur within a country or trans-nationally.It is a crime against the humanity.According to statistics ,human trafficking represents an estimated 31.6billion of international trade per annum in2010.In my opinion,human trafficking is the biggest problem in the world because most of the time it is hidden happens between people who benefit from it ,so we should stand together to stop it !
I think human traffickers are some of the worst people in the world. I don't feel sorry for them when they are caught and punished. It would be difficult to find a punishment too harsh for someone doing these terrible crimes.
human trafficking occcur every country because there is no such strict punishment in the government or other wise people should not raise against this kind of incident onw who can raise the voice agaiinst of this kind of activites then definetely give punishement to them severly other can afraid to do such kind sexual arrest ment of girls and children
Human trafficking is such a serious problem. We face the problem too, though the criminals here are subject to severe punishment.
Re correction:
1. Can you find a common learner error in this sentence: ",hoping him to correct my mistakes."? Tip: You say "Hoping you can correct me or my mistakes."; you don't say, though, "Hoping you to correct me...". But you can say "Hoping to correct you or your mistakes."
2. In this sentence "Human Trafficking is a real problem that most of us ignore it ,", there's a common mistake, too. Tip: You don't need the pronoun "it" after the verb "ignore". An example for you: "That's a problem that we need to deal with." You don't say "That's a problem that we need to deal with it."
You're right. Human trafficking is a big business nowadays. Some says it's bigger than drug trafficking. So, everyone have some responsibility to try to eradicate this horrendous activity.
Observations :-
1. donot - the correct spelling is 'do not'.
2. Comma - the correct positioning of a comma is next to a word before it, and should not have spacing before it. For an example in your above blog, "this blog ,hoping". The correct positioning of the comma should be "this blog, hoping"
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I think human traffickers are some of the worst people in the world. I don't feel sorry for them when they are caught and punished. It would be difficult to find a punishment too harsh for someone doing these terrible crimes.
Human trafficking is a dirty job.
It has become the worst business in this modern world. Great topic, and great try. Keep it up.
Bravo! You have discussed here a serious profiteering of the world with a view to make awareness in the society.
Interesting blog. I'm really glad that you came up with this topic since it's hidden from the society and people don't talk about it much.
What can I say, came to know that sometimes HIGHUPS IN POWER are behind this DIRTY BUSINESS.
Good try, Amel.
Human trafficking is such a serious problem. We face the problem too, though the criminals here are subject to severe punishment.
Re correction:
1. Can you find a common learner error in this sentence: ",hoping him to correct my mistakes."? Tip: You say "Hoping you can correct me or my mistakes."; you don't say, though, "Hoping you to correct me...". But you can say "Hoping to correct you or your mistakes."
2. In this sentence "Human Trafficking is a real problem that most of us ignore it ,", there's a common mistake, too. Tip: You don't need the pronoun "it" after the verb "ignore". An example for you: "That's a problem that we need to deal with." You don't say "That's a problem that we need to deal with it."
Hope you can get it!
You're right. Human trafficking is a big business nowadays. Some says it's bigger than drug trafficking. So, everyone have some responsibility to try to eradicate this horrendous activity.
Observations :-
1. donot - the correct spelling is 'do not'.
2. Comma - the correct positioning of a comma is next to a word before it, and should not have spacing before it. For an example in your above blog, "this blog ,hoping". The correct positioning of the comma should be "this blog, hoping"