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Writing Challenge: Terrifying Two-Line Tale

Posted by sORrow on October 29, 2015

DELICIOUS FOOD

My old grandma is always lied down in her bed, she's kindda mute… I brought her the soup dish, that I got she's sitting, gazing into the ceiling... I couldn’t see her face… "hey baby… you brought my food?" she growled while turning her face…

AFTER LIFE

I was in rush, wanted to pass the street so fast… I did… hearing an earsplitting horn… and after that a great braking… boom!!! I turned to see what happened… saw myself down… in a bleeding face…

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sORrow October 31, 2015 19:08

thanks to all of you.
and you , Dear Tara. sure. consider it done.
MARY October 30, 2015 22:15

Really disturbing stories! :/
Tara Benwell October 30, 2015 14:14

Oooh. Scary ones! I love these. I challenge you to rewrite them without using ellipses (...).
Onee-chan October 30, 2015 6:20

Hoooooo...., terrified to read AFTER LIFE.
Expector Smith October 29, 2015 23:15

Good work!
Elen October 29, 2015 17:23

Oooh! really scary stories! But don't afraid your grandma, she is your grandma :) About the After life, I guess that is what happened to every person in the end of his life.