Writing Challenge: Pretty Paragraphs


In what way I can say how much he is pretty! Basically I do not know I can use pretty ?! or should say nice-looking , winning, charming, marvelous,...

How I should transfer my feeling about his magnificent features, you should face him.
Surely you will be fascinated by his striking beauties and fall in love at first sight. From his Lion-like skin, powerful sturdy strong arms, his stable stone chest and Spine which magnified more and more by green necklace, and brilliant bright azure turquoises decorate him and multiply his dazzling magnitude.


Almost I breathe whole my life in his heart and not only me but also millions are proud of birth, living ,growing, get gray, die with him. And forever and ever will stick in his lovers' heart his famed and admired name Iran!

In less than 2 hours he should war Italy, the battle to gain world  League (volleyball)!

Yes I love my loveable country Iran! I wish him best to come.

dear friend;the colored expressions are Links, please check them.

Thanks for reading my blog.

I should use it as reference , but I liked to personify my Lovely country Iran as a male lion.

@ Iranian Lion men v-ballers  has registered  second victory in the 2013 FIVB World League, and trounced European powerhouse Italy in a thrilling four-set match.

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  • That's a natural feeling, is not it so?!

  •        Hi my friend, if every one falls in love with his or her country like you as will, their countries will not be destroyed by their people's hands. God bless you and your beloved country.

  • Dear Tara;

    Thanks for your encouraging comment, that's your kindness.

    I'm pleased that you liked it. I added the space. Thanks for the point as well.

    about Volleyball game that one which I mentioned above, yes IRAN won. :)

  • Very creative! I enjoyed reading this post. The adjectives you used are all excellent. 

    You might want to add another space between "magnitude" and "Almost" to show that this is a new paragraph. Spacing is really important for readers. 

    Cheers,

    Tara

    PS-Who won the game?

  • Sorry I thought it was a football game.

    I mean Iran's football team used to be so good and impressive. I wonder why China's soccer team is so weak and disappointing - it has nothing to do with Iran's team :))

  • dear Yas;

    please to meet you here and I'm glad you liked it.

  • wow dear...i couldn't stop reading it...i read it again and again.....it was beautiful.....i proud of u ...and of course...my country IRAN 

  • Mr. Smith;

    hi and welcome , thanks for your presence. but I did not get your comment meaning!

    you wanna say that the Iran's strength in football is the result of China's weakness?!

    First I should say that I had mentioned Volleyball game not Football! then it is clear that everyman has talent not in all fields.

  • World cup? But I know Iran's football team can be so strong - while China's football/soccer team is nothing.

  • Think please!!
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