Writing Challenge : Dinner Guest

I would like to invite Mr.Bean ( Rowan Atkinson ) as my dinner guest. In my view he is the NO.1 comedian in the world. When I was more younger , I was fond of his programme. This is incredible how he act without using voice. His every performance just wonderful. His johnny english  movie series one of my favorite movie.

 

It was night before my exam day. The  final exam of six grade. I finished my study hurriedly because I know Mr. Bean will appear on tv that night. Then I went to my mother and told her that I want to see Mr.Bean’s programme. but she denied because of my exam and told me “ go to your room and be prepare for your exam, otherwise I call your father”. My father is very strict person. Then I made a plan, I locked-up my door and went to my friend house for watched Mr.Bean’s programme. That was nice and laughable programme. When I returned home, I found my father waiting  for me……. I think you can guess what’s happened then ….lol

Still when I feel depress sometime I watch comedy show on youtube. It’s help me a lot to recover my mental situation.

I would invite my younger brother and sister as well, as I know they are also fond of his performance. I would request him for a special performance for me and my brother and sister. I have a lot of question for him so I would ask him some question. Such as, is it a god gifted skill or he practice a lot for acting? Why he chose his career as a comedian ?

It would be very tough task for me to find out perfect menu for him because I don’t know about his food habit. I would serve him some occasional menu of our country. I hope, He would like it. I would hire someone expert for cooking . Because I can not cook.

 

For appetizer I would serve him crispy fried cauliflower and spicy patishapta ( A kind of beef roll).i would serve Vegetable biryani, Hilsha fish fry, Mutton rezala, Vagetables salad and Borhani ( A traditional yogurt drink ) as main course and I would serve Ras Malai as dessert.

It would be dream come true for me. Finally I would take some photograph with him and It would be most memorable day of my life.

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# I will be grateful if someone help to find out my mistakes of writing English...

# CORRECTION,PLS 

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  • Thank you very much  #ADMIN .

  • Mr. Bean is so funny! I love the Christmas special. Your crispy fried cauliflower dish sounds yummy! 

    Re Corrections: Instead of "more younger" you can just say "younger". Or, you can say when I was "much younger" if you want to emphasize that it was a long time ago.

    "When I was more younger, I was fond of his programme."

    Watch your writing for missing articles. Which words could you place in the spaces?

    My father is ____ very strict person.

    It would be very tough task for me to find out ____ perfect menu.

    It would be _____ dream come true for me.

  • yeah it would be a funny situation with Mr.Bean....  :)  thank you  @Luzzi 

  • #noaspls ..yap maybe i would not. but i have a plan for this. i would keep a bag with me for hiding my food which i learn form him.....  :) 

  • Thank you # Expector smith .

  • heyyy, that is great idea!!! I cant more agree with you - he is the best comedian and I just imagined what all would happen during your dinner, I mean all those funny situations :-D

  • Can you eat all those food since you would be laughing the whole through dinner?  :)

  • I enjoyed Mr. Bean's TV shows too.

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