This is once again a dialogue (Blog) in response to Onee Chan's Writing challenge using
present perfect tense
L: Have you seen my heart honey, I am feeling my chest is empty?
B: You might have dropped somewhere on your way!
L: May be, sure, cause my all ways come to you, maybe I have already given my heart to you and forgot!
B: What do you mean "forgot"? Are there many whom you have been giving your heart and forgetting to whom it's been given?
L: Nnno no. I swear to you there is no one but you.
B: So, how come you say you forgot where you have lost your heart if there is none but me?
L: Oh darling why don't you just say, you have taken my heart.
(B said nothing...................just smiled).
Comments
@anum
I am glad it touched your heart!
love the whole dialogue :)
Thank you very much Onee.
Thanks Marshaa and Janeth for your kind comments. I appreciate that.
Nice dialogue and writing! Present perfect tense and "perfect understanding" (as someone has already said). Keep writing!!
nice & funny.. thanks dear Mishaikh for sharing.
Thanks Ada for your time to read and posting your nice comment.
Yes it is Estanis, there should be if the love is pure and honest.
Thanks.
That was my aim to make the readers lost in the beloved for the beloved.
The letters L and B also has the meaning "lover and Beloved".
Thanks for all the encouragement.
Thanks for the "cute" comment.
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