During my blog posted title always is daily news, today i want to try to write a title as What would you do? If you won $10M price in lucky drawa.
If i won $10M, i will separate all of my money to the few parts. First step i will put 50% to investment companies, earn the profit and save my life in future. Second, i will give 25% to my father and mother, let them retired and enjoy the life until the end, my parents are very hard work to earn money save my life since i'm child. Third, i will put 10% to societies of donation to help the people who's need help. The balance 15% will spend with my wife, go for travel and shopping.
Do you think money is very important? As my opinions money is very important, but compare with family i will choose my family. How about you?
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thanks you all commends and correction.
Hi!
Your topic make me wonder if you write your blog every day.
Good! I also think that family is always more important than money.
I am very busy today. Therefore, I can only make some correction for you.
I hope my corrections are right.
My parents very hard work to earn money....
My parents work very hard to earn money... (Right)
As my opinions....
In my opinion (Right)
I hope this will do help.
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