Two-time

After being inspired from the poem written by Rose De Leon and published by Fr@nk on EC, I have written mine. I am looking forward to knowing your viewpoints how I did my job.


I forgave you whenever you disheartened;
Gave you warm welcome when you returned

But you gave me tears and pains in return;
At my sorrowful feeling you made so much fan.

You have broken my trust two times;
When you were caught of two-timing two times

I never miss you when you depart;
I have dislodged you from my heart.

Since deception you are nothing in my life;
I changed my decision to make you my wife.


Two-time means to carry on a romantic relationship with two people at the same time

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  • My dearest sister as well as my best and regular commenter, Onee-chan!

    Please don't scratch my old gashes by asking me how much she made fun at my lugubrious feeling :(

    However, the decision is appreciated that makes me feel happy :). If you don't two-time, you must be mindful lady. I mean the lady who possess mind lol

    Two-time is also verb, you can use it without "do" :). You told me you always confused classification of word in what parts of speech it falls.

    Thank you so much for appreciating my poetic skill. I feel relieved :)
  • Simply wonderful poem! :)

  • My dear bro, what do you mean by this sentence...

    "At my sorrowful feeling you made so much fan."

    So, she's not his(your) wife yet. :D Okay, I appreciate your decision. :D I admit that many girls now do two-time, excluding me, okay. LOL....

  • @Shoba,

    My decision not "was" but is correct.

    Btw this word is also new to those who two-time. Thank for encouragement. :)
  • Your decision was correct, Arif. :)  

    It's a nice poem and two-time is a new term to me. Thanks for teaching it to me. 

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