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Posted by bluerose on May 23, 2012

The heavy rain

Woke me up from my dreams

it was a symphony found its way to my ears

It has been heard by every one all over the world

It attracted me..

even though it seemed sad, It was telling me a story of the immortal raindrops through the ages.

Raindrops on my face..

woke me up from deep sleep
Tell me

Give me your strength

Raindrops smooth when falling on the rose

And Stronger when etched marble

Calm

Willing to go away wind

I still see the raindrops on the rose

Forgot all my concern with the sound of rainfall

Sweet smell emitted by the Earth

thanks for Mr Night for help Writing this poem :)

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Syam Sasidhar August 8, 2012 11:21

Nice. i love rain also...
bluerose May 28, 2012 0:37

wow dear teacher@Anele thanks for your comment , I love the rain, when Raining I play like children , I like this feeling :)
bluerose May 28, 2012 0:30

thanks dear @Amel for nice comment :)
bluerose May 28, 2012 0:27

thanks my dear friend @Hend really i am happy you like my poem :)
bluerose May 26, 2012 0:16

thanks @ ameer1001 for nice comment :)
bluerose May 26, 2012 0:00

thanks dear Mr night :)

I feel very proud when I read your comment, Thank you for the wonderful words
bluerose May 25, 2012 23:56

thanks for nice comment & nice photo @ Sid , i like your photo :)
bluerose May 25, 2012 23:52

thanks from my heart @ dear Yasemin for great comment :) My brother Mr helped me to write poem, but I write poems in Arabic :)
bluerose May 25, 2012 23:43

thanks @sanggee gultom for nice commeent :) i am really happy to see your comment
Amel May 24, 2012 23:00

Nice poem, verrry nice. liked it a lot

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thanks @sanggee gultom for nice commeent :) i am really happy to see your comment