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Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, it is thought that the young generation finds very difficult in having a healthy lifestyle such as healthy eating, physical activities, weight management, and stress management, which are in charge of by the schools and parents. I definitely agree with this statement.

The substantial factor affecting the children's lifestyle comes from the way their parent living every day. Because the kids are too young to disgust their daily habits whether healthy or not, mothers and fathers are a belief, play a role model and have the closest relationship with them so that the children based on parents' good or bad style of living to imitate. In fact, parent’s negative manners affecting the health are more repetitive that lead to being unhealthy manners for the kids. For example, if the parents want to create healthy eating for the kids, the initial changing from their habits of eating such as consume healthier food and also reduce buying the snack and low nutritious food.

Another factor from the schools due to the student spend entire time staying at school, where they will be aware of the theories to consider the way of living whether good or bad for health. Moreover, the teachers will guide them to practice or adjust their behaviour to reach healthy lifestyle standards. Last but not least, the young generation is responsible for themselves, it forces them to develop and maintain good manners every day and change immediately if their behaviours infringe healthy living standards.

In conclusion,  we can not deny a healthy lifestyle is not little affecting on the future of the young generation that indicates schools and the parents must be much more responsible for the children's lifestyle, especially the parents.

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