The Concert

It's important to me to attend musical concert here in cairo ,but no many people bought ticket for the concert in advance, but quite afew cam along and bought the ticket on the door. Unfortunately when I touched the antique picture which is hung on the wall it came apart in my hand.that made me fall on the floor,but my friend was with me when I came round after that ,but he told me if the story comes out ,The security will arrests you .So we decided to  came out from the concert.I was planning a surprise holiday for her birthday ,but i'm sure it's going to come off.When I sat in the concert I heared lot of whisperes.

The man behind me told a man behind him "I don't know if a place in the council come up for a while"

I wonder what they've talked about but I remember I came a cross on the internet at such identicla topics

So I told my friend that subject is so dangerous .so We call the police and leave the concert.

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  • Thanks all about this words .It made my day.

  • I like the idea of the story. But, could you explain further the last three sentences?

    Keep writing! :)

  • Assalamu alaikum Ahmed N. Elmenshawy. I agree with Mr. White Knight. A good try.

  • That is a very good try and such confidence is required , keep writing and slowly u will be able to overcome ur mistakes.

  • Omg... You broke the picture? And I don't understand why did you call the police? What wrong that man sais?

  • thanks Eman

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