This is the first time I try to make a poem. I hope I am not too far away.
The bells are ringing
calling closed doors to open
the child does not want milk
tears won't dry
The bells are ringing
Many of them are afraid
Nights are long
The cry of that child is so loud
They want survival, who cares?
The bells are ringing
hungry birds fly helplessly
in the cloudy sky
The space is not enough
Weak wings stop to flutter
The bells are ringing
Tears are still dropping
But their shouts still linger
In that cloudy sky
The widows sing silently and
The bells are ringing
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Terima kasih banyak, Masgareng! Saya harap juga. I hope Allah will respond to your wishes. Thanks, for your kind and nice comment! I hope to be one of your friends.
dear Dara i meant that you improve you skill (english) and offer topic for considering by you poetry.
Great poem. Poem with message for the world. I hope God shut up the bell, and universe come peace.
Main samajgiya acha nahi hain. Ya hain paihili dafa. It's my first time to do it. I really appreciate your encouragement. Thank you, Salman!
Really good Poem
Privyet Winnie The Pooh! I am a beginner in this line. I could not get you. What do you mean by having two birds with one stone? Nevertheless, thank you, my dear good friend!
anyway, there is use of versification.
you kill two birds with one stone.
very nice, so pleasure...
Kiya haal hain ELF? Main wagiyi is kei taarif karta hain. It's a good thing to see your comment. I really appreciate it.
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