The bells are ringing

This is the first time I try  to make a poem.  I hope I am not too far away.


The bells are ringing 

calling closed doors  to  open

 the child does not want milk

tears  won't dry 

The bells are ringing 

Many of them are afraid  

Nights are long

The  cry of that child is so loud

They want survival, who cares?

The bells are ringing 

hungry birds fly helplessly 

in the cloudy sky

The space is not enough

Weak wings stop to flutter

The bells are ringing

Tears are still dropping

But their shouts still linger

In that cloudy sky

The widows sing silently and

The bells are ringing

Votes: 0
E-mail me when people leave their comments –

You need to be a member of MyEnglishClub to add comments!

Join MyEnglishClub


  • Terima kasih banyak, Masgareng! Saya harap juga.  I hope Allah will respond to your wishes. Thanks, for your kind and nice comment! I hope to be one of your friends.

  • dear Dara i meant that you  improve you skill (english) and offer topic for considering by you poetry.

  • Great poem. Poem with message for the world. I hope God shut up the bell, and universe come peace.

  • Main samajgiya acha nahi hain. Ya hain paihili dafa. It's my first time to do it. I really appreciate your encouragement. Thank you, Salman!

  • Really good Poem

  • Privyet Winnie The Pooh! I am a beginner in this line.  I could not get you. What do you mean by having two birds with one stone? Nevertheless, thank you, my dear good friend!

  • anyway, there is use of versification.

    you kill two birds with one stone.

  • Tak sal du ha Yanitary! It was so nice of you to say that. Thanks!
  • very nice, so pleasure...

  • Kiya haal hain ELF? Main wagiyi is kei taarif karta hain. It's a good thing to see your comment. I really appreciate it.

This reply was deleted.