Paper Doll - Story About My Chillhood

Hi all, It's being a while not posting any blogs. I have something to tell about my childhood life, but i did it in some sketches. Hope you readers like it. Chill.That's all about it. Hope I can make the sequel soon.

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  • Hi Jasmine. I wish to have time to draw again.

  • Hi Oneto, Appreciate your comment, yeah agree, I shouldn't use other language and didn't aligned my text properly. Actually when i drew this i was not mean for this My EC, it was just to let someone read it and understand what i wanted to tell. Later I thought that why don't I post it here since I already drew it and such a waste just to let a person to read it. So that's how it began to be improper. Hahaha...anyway, in my next comic, i will try to improve it, thanks my new friend :)

  • Wow, great!! I like true story.. Nice sketch. You have a good talent in painting.

    Just for suggestion, next time you can use English only, because maybe some people here can't understand what you wrote.

    If I look in detail, the simple coloring is good enough. But, look out! The one without background coloring looks better than with background color. In my opinion, if you give coloring for cartoon, no need for background color. But if you want to draw in black and white, you can give scratch on background.

    And the text direction: Align Bottom Left. I think it's a little annoyed.

    Sorry to say. It's just in my opinion. I'm not the smart one to draw. However, I would never can draw like you. I hope it will be a good idea for you. 

    Nice story for childhood life. Waiting for the sequel. Ganbatte!! (Do your best) :)

  • Hi Jalal, Thanks a lot. Really appreciate your comment. 

    It based on what really happened in my childhood, which reflects to what actually we are having in the current life. Anyway, honestly I never made any comic strips for quite long. But since lately something triggered me about life, and its rang me about what I experienced before. Just the time are different, but human stays in the same behavior.

  • Anele, I used ordinary 'gel ink' pen 0.6mm. But I did sketched it pencil to get everything fitted into 5 pages-so it won't be neither too long nor short. The color is just colored pencil.:)

  • I wanna ask something.  What pen did you use when you drew this?  Was it a sign pen, a ballpen or a pencil?  I guess, you used colored pencils to color your drawings.  My brand is Faber Castell.  What about yours?

  • Hi Anele, I wish to be a cartoonist and still have that vision. It's kind of good method of telling stories. I wish to write about other people's story too. :)

  • I think you are a cartoonist!

  • You got a sharp memory.  I hardly remember what happened to me when I was six, lol.

  • Well, your Malay words gave you away, Naim. LOL

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