Too lame to tell the world,too early to meet,
I found love onlineI i was to shy on the street
Waiting up on the screen, for her to shine,
Not many stickers back then,but we managed just fine
Screen was full of tabs open,so I don't get caught,
When my mom yelled for food,not yet hungry I fought
Too many spellings were killed,we murdered grammar,
Too nervous too excited,my fingers typed like hammer...
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What a great writing!
Btw, I used to believe with online love bcs I was felling in love with someone I knew for around over a year. But once he gone and I was still thinking of him. I was curious what actually happened and finally I got an answer that really hurt me that he said "Online is just for fun". I was numb at the moment. But now, I think he was true, online is just for fun. I'm sick of it.
nicely written
You have weaved so nicely.So honest words and your effort very good.But don't play with your feelings dear.One day your emotions will not bear with yourself.
Nice written. It seems to be your own experience, at least I believe so. I don't want to take your optimism ... it's just ... online love can be deceptive. There is so much dishonesty in the world and I have met many people they believed that they had found true love, online. It's like riding on razors edge... you can get injured.
I know, the feeling of love is the greatest one we can have in our entire life and everyone is looking for ... but disappointed or cheated love is the worst. This kind of experiences can change our life and our trust in people.
Be careful, please!!!
But you did write correctly, too: we always have to risk something to reach a goal.
So: Good luck!
Nicely Played with words Azhar/
Kiyon ap ko grammar mara? Who is that lucky one? Azhar, extend my regards to her. I hope to be one of your friends. write simple sentences to avoid mistakes. Nice try!