Miss Someone

Well, I have a lot of ideas to make new blogs, but i had a new one this afternoon when i was in a park. There are a lot of families there, walking together, looking around, taking some pictures with their family.

All of these were ordinary activities that I see everyday, But there was one moment that made me so Miss someone, someone who always with me previously. Yeah.. it all started from a man with his son, They looked so happy. Then they came over and greeted me (maybe because they saw that I was watching them). They invited me to join them. At first, I felt so happy - until i remembered my Daddy,, He was so kind - like that man. After that I just wanted to go home, so i did. I Thanked them for the precious moment but it was hard for me to enjoy it.

After all, I just remembered the time when my dad left my mother, all of us. He passed away with peace. Passed away with a smile. Next month was the month when he left us in that year,  and next month will be exactly the 11th year he left me,

I LOVE YOU DAD

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  • Dear Adimas

    My tears were running through my cheeks when I wrote this. Even though my dad died years ago, the feel of lost is still with me, with my brothers and sisters. I still missed him, though we were not that close. He was a quiet man, reserved in showing his love. I know how you felt. Thanks for a LOVELY, LOVELY, LOVELY blog.

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  • Ario, yeah Its hard, but in other hand I can remember his kindness :))

    Viviana,, you're right Viv, that is the way for me to feel his kindness and love, and always inspire me to do like what he did :)) thank you all.. Hugs Hugs Hugs

  • Dear Nadira, yes we will meet them when the time is come :))

    Mbeb.. i don't disappoint him, just remembering him :)) and about my Family, I just trying to give in /to yield.,, 

  • Hi adi, we are lucky we keep memories of our beloved. This is the way to keep them alive. The grief will, may be, always accompany them but as a back ground, we'll be able to live again the moments we spent with the people we cared and still care abt. So, welcome to memories.

  • It must be a hard moment for you to remember about your father. My condolences.

  • Mbeb,,,

    and I cried when I was reading on..

    Make Your Daddy to be proud of You,,,

    Dont dissapoint Him and Your Family,,,

    *Hug Mbeb*

  • I know  how  you feel  , one  can never  forget  ones  loved  ones, who have departed , and  may be  we will meet them up yonder when our time comes :)

  • dear Scarlett, thanks for the coorection, I should correct it now LOL., yeah I should make him proud of me :)) thank you

  • Hi Adimas,

    I'm sorry for reading your sad memory about your beloved Daddy. I hope by missing him, you would be stronger and have passion to become a good one. That would make your Father keep that peaceful smile in Paradise. He would protect you and lift you up whenever you fail. Just remember that he always be around you :) Stay blesses! Wish you all the best!

    I'm learner of English. So, the mistakes I could find may not totally correct, but I hope it would help you to realize something by yourself.

    - I have/ have got something (not just got)

    - All of them ( I think all should be plural, not uses for it)

    - someone that who was always with me last time. (someone should go with who/whom in using relative clause)

    - they looks so happy. then they came to me and greets me (I think in this case you should use the simple past tense) try correcting by yourself, won't you? :)

    - After all, i just remembering the time when my dad leave left me, mother, all of us. he passed away with peace. passed away with a smile. and Next month was the month when he leave  left us in that year,  and next month is exactly the 11st years since he leave left me (I'm not so sure about this sentence, hope someone would help us)

    Dear friend! Cheer up! I know your Dad also loves you and be proud of you.

    Best wishes!

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