Juggernaut

In the middle of the night I woke up lying on the path in the dark forest. Suddenly I heard the steps coming - almost running to me. But I could not see him clear. Just two X-ray eyes on the background of the dark silhouette. Somebody was approaching me. My heart beat increased and fear took control of me. In a while it all stopped and I could finally see, who was in front of me.

Two legs were sticking out of the ground. And before I asked myself "What the -_-?", one eye on the each of them suddenly opened and "IT" started to move towards me. I tried to escape but it was impossible. Those two eyes like spotlights were chasing me. And the main thing that gave me heebie-jeebie was it's opportunity to MOVE QUICKLY!

I stumbled and fell down. And before that unbelievably ugly creature came close to me, I noticed that those legs were moving like if this monster was using them to push away the air instead of the ground. And the deep ditch behind it scared the hell out of me! It meant that this creature moves HALF UNDERGROUND!!! I just lay and could not believe that it really happens. But before this monster caught me, the light of it's eyes made me recall the events that happened before.

I opened the door of one house. That door was designed the way to make it look like the door of the coffin. It was huge Halloween party there. And the first thing that scared me, was downstairs which began right at the entrance. But I didn't pay much attention to it, because I felt that this place is somehow familiar to me.

There were a lot of masked people (very ugly and scary masked people) inside, but one of them was dressed as James Bond. There was nothing wrong with him, except two details. He was juggling with yo-yo and his face was distorted by never ending smile. And firstly I thought "hmmm "Are you kidding me? James Bond in his expensive black costume is juggling with yo-yo?... Ok, nothing wrong, let it be"

But with passing the time he started to be annoying. I said to him "Hey, James, enough... You can play with this yo-yo somewhere else." But he didn't listen to me. I came closer to him and suddenly everything around became quieter, except the sound of his yo-yo. And everyone's masks seemed to be their real faces that were watching at me. My heart went up my throat.

Suddenly "James" turned his face in my direction and said "little Heebie wants to go out!" I turned back to go out of there. But before, I came to the stairs, one picture "Juggernaut and Co", that was hung on the wall, grabbed my attention. There were depicted some weird and creepy things and creatures. One of them was little "baby James (but in his expensive black costume yet)". And in the middle of the picture stood Juggernaut (mighty, mercilessly, destructive and unstoppable monster) with "baby half-buried monster" on his hands. And in one of Juggernaut's hands, there was a leash attached to one of the legs of the monster.

I recalled everything and said "Wow, Heebie-jeebie! You just scared the hell out of me! Sit! Good boy! Let's go and make one's blood run COLD!!!!!!!!!"

 

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  • Thank you for encouraging White Knight! Good thing that I learn something new from each new blog:)

  • Maybe I will do that later, Elen. Thank you!

  • everyone has a unique way of describing things and writing something Roman , u dont need to follow something as a benchmark always , dont worry , write it your own way as u find it suitable like u did here , keep writing and u will eventually be able to improve gradually much . 

  • Hey Roman, you didn't fail. Your story is very nice. You can correct it a little and make it perfect by creating a few lines where you will explain some things and anyone who will read it from now on will understand. Just edit your post. Don't be sad about it, man :)
  • Thank you White Knight! But as you can see, I forgot to mention "How did Juggernaut lose his memory"... And I really feel so sorry to fail such a good plot... And this kind of writing is not my. I just used it... I don't know whose is this kind of writing the stories.

  • Interesting , with such an approach as u described , you can start a series , like first u described the event and then the back story , so this is quite a different approach of describing things . 

  • Hi Robbie! You are right:) I like this my story, despite the fact that I made mistake in the plot... And I am excitedish because of that picture, because I am able to draw that monster right as I imagined it:) I don't know about White King:) Who knows what can happen further:) But I think this is the end of this story. Thank you for nice comment! Have a good weekend!

  • It looks like you're having sleepless nights while writing this blog, Roman! Kidding! I noticed your excitement the way you've used some words. If the White King and his walkers are present in your story, it would have been a riot he he... :)

  • Muskan! So, I am glad now :)

  • Hi Lucinka! Thank you! But you know, my story could be better... I don't know why I made such mistakes in the plot.

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