love story :)

ONE UPON A TIME, THERE WAS A ISLAND WHERE ALL THE FEELING’S LIVED. HAPYNESS, SADNESS, KNOWLEDGE AND ALL OF THE OTHER FEELING INCLUDING LOVE.

ONE DAY, IT WAS ANNOUNCED TO THE FEELINGS THAT THE ISLAND WOULD SINK. ALL OF PEOPLE REPAIRED THE BOAT AND LEFT

ONLY LOVE WAS WANTED Persever untill lass the possible moment.

when the island was almost skink. Love decided to find the help. At that moment, Richness was passing by love in the grand boat. Love called: “ Richness, can i go with you (can you take me with you) ? Love, i can’t . my boat was many  golds and sliveds there was not place for you in here”

love asked Vanity, who was also passing by love in the beautifull velses. Please help me, Vanity! No, I cant, love. You are so wet and might denage my boat. Vanity answered .
when Sadness was passing, love asked to help again. Sadness, Let me go with you ? oh, love ... I so sad that I need to be myself .
Happiness was also passing but she was so happy that she did not even hear when love called her

suddenly, there was a voice : come on with me, love?, these was an elder. Love was immerse  herself in enjoyed and lucky that even fogot ask the elder his name. When they come to the cry land. The elder went his own way .

Love realizing how much he owed the elder and asked knowledge, another elder. “ Who helped me ?  that was time, knowledge said.  Time ? but why did time helped me? Love asked .

Knowledge smile with deep wisdom answered : BUT only time is capable understanding  how great love is .

My friends ! ,above is a story that i saw in the wed vietnamese, then I tried to translate to English and post it in here 
i thinks that is meaningfull story. you should be read it 
and..  above all .. if have a lot to mistakes, i will very glad if you say with me about it .... thanks so much :) 
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  • Needs lot of corrections!

  • noaslpls : thanks for your link :), I will trying more :))

  • What a nice anecdote. Thank you for sharing. You may read this link about using Capitalisation in English words.

    1. Use of Capital Letters

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