Because you are so good to me
Your face is the world joy.
Your inners are like beam light.
I knew you as if …..
I have seen you before finding you
Like the river, you spring joy inside me.
You wipe grievance from my vision and
laugh for the coming time.
During early morning, your
features explode light.
With you, I am alive creature
Your clearness is the solution
Because you are so good to me,
and your face is the world joy.
I meet you and your age, just like
Flowers encountered by dew.
Your feelings are completed,
Your beautiful songs are blessed, with days.
Your features will stay there, just like before.
Comments
Danke Rose! Is it possible to be one of your friends? Thanks for your comment on that poem.
I did read your poem with pleasure. Many people commented already on it.I agree with them. Your poem shows the view of someone to his beloved one with romantic feelings and respect.
There isn't anything to add.
Gamza hamnida Inha. Thanks for your touching comment on that poem.
Vanakkam Kanimohi! Thanks for your nice comment.
beautiful poem.. touched. thanks for sharing
Thanks and nice one
Terima kasih banyak, Deantika! Thanks for pressing the like button.
Kush kelibsiz Nurullo. Thanks for your encouraging comment. I will do my best to help you to improve. If you have any question, send me a message. Thank you again.
Impressive ! i've never read good poem like this. Bravoo
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