Hi, everyone!
I would like to share with you. A great festival of kites. Today I went at the city of my country on my way I saw a lot of people go out of the city. Then I remembered that Today there was a great festival of kites near of the city. In all the country the people fly Kites and others countries too. But these kites are very big and very colorful. Some kites are displayed. You can look on them pictures about the cultural of my country. Today we remember our families that have died. We visited their tombs usually people fly their kites there in the cemetery. A long time ago people thought that kites were communicating with departed souls. Now It is more cultural. If you can correct this notebook Thank you.
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Thank you for your corrections Onee chan. I am glad you like this post. I would like to tell you that some kites are shown off and others more smaller, people usually enjoy to fly them. This year I did not go to see this event. I only saw the big kites from the window while I was traveling. However when I arrived at home I went to fly kites with my nephew in the cemetery because we usually meet every year with my family enjoyed this holiday.
Interesting topic! Next, I hope you can make more than one paragraph. :)
Hello Oscar, it's so cool. What a BIG and WONDERFUL kite! I wonder IF it can really FLY. You should have taken the fly kite picture, too. :))
Just the correction based on my moderate English skill.
I would like to share with you. A great festival of kites. Today I went to the city in my country. On my way, I saw a lot of people went out to the city. Then, I remembered that today there was a great festival of kites near of the city. In the whole country, people flew kite and other countries, too. But these kites are very big and very colorful. Some kites are shown off. You can look at the picture about the culture in my country. Today we remembered our families that have died. We visited their tombs, and usually people fly their kites there at the cemetery. A long time ago, people thought that kite communicated with departed souls. Now, it is just a culture.
Dara Gino, Yes. Children like to fly the kites. I have two nephews and They enjoy to fly kites.
Elen. I am glad to know you enjoy this custom. I live in Chimaltenango about one hour from the city.
noaslpls. Great! In these event you can admire the creativity of people.
Thanks for sharing such cultural information. Over here, flying kites also has become a competitive event.
Nice custom Oscar. We also have this custom but in February and i don't think that here it has to do with the people that have died. Which is your city by the way? If you want to say :)
Mi amigo Oscar, hola! Me gushtan las kometas. My daughter likes kites. I am lecturing now. Later, I will see the rest of your work for corrections.