It was love

It was love

The birds are still in the trees.

In the spring of love, we used to  sing

 We talked privately and watched the birds

 flying from one branch to the other,

Suddenly, yesterday was lost from us,

 and there was sorrow in the heart.

We flew together in a sky dream.

We squeezed the intoxication of love

But we were still thirty

It was love,

Don't ask or blame us

Paradise was only a step but

It was lost and then yesterday

 was lost  from us

It was love.

Don't ask or blame us.

 

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    • Saya tidak tahu tetapi, life is full of surprises. Thanks for your nice comment Fizzy. 

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    Hi Dara

    The first verses are so beautiful, I enjoyed reading them.

    But the ending verse surprised me, why no one is blamed? When love is lost, usually one of the lovers is blamed.

     

     

    • Mutashakram Saba! I am glad you enjoyed reading the poem. Sometimes both lovers have no-fault. Circumstances play a great role. Thanks for your nice observation.

  • Maraming salamat Shine! I hope to be one of your friends. Thanks for pressing the like button.

  • Shooran ya Ahmed, thanks for pressing the like button.!

  • ometimes we express what is in our minds with verses of poetry, which are a distinctive way to express what is in the heart of feelings, deep words describing the passion of a lover that his love enables him, and his heart almost burns from the intensity of his longing!

    • Taman ya Ahmad!  I agree with you. Nice comment. 

  • Dear Bosona, I hope to be one of your friends. Thanks for pressing the like button!  

  • Your poem reminded me on popular song from Rag'n'Bone Man.. some verses are here:

    "We bleed ourselves in vain
    How tragic is this game?
    Turn around, I'm holding on to someone
    But the love is gone
    Carrying the load, with wings that feel like stone
    Knowing that we nearly fell so far now
    It's hard to tell


    Yeah we came so close, it was almost love
    It was almost love, it was almost love..."

     

    • Thanks, Bossona for your nice comment. Both poems look alike. I hope to be one of your friends. 

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