When I was walking in the park,I heard something in the jungle. At first I didn't understand whose voice it is.Maybe the voice belonged to an animal,maybe a human.Before long I decided to walk toward the voice.Later I saw a girl under the tree and her leg was bleeding and the bear was trapped.I went to her and tried to open the bear trap once or twice.After I opened the trap in the meantime began to talk with her.Her name's Jane and she's 25 years old. While I was talking with her,I called an ambulance to take her to the hospital.After came to ambulance I helped carry her to ambulance. And also I got her phone number to meet at the weekend.
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Helo Thunder....It's like a fairy tale...lol....
Very short, but interesting.......!!:))
Then what?
Mind the use of proper tenses.
Nice sotry.
It's not important dream or story, I wanted to improve my writing skill. That's all. Thanks for your comments.
Oi there, folks
Hmmm....I feel obliged to agree with Grace that it must have been a dream, how else could it be explained that there was a jungle in the park and a girl with a bleeding leg was under a tree beside a trapped bear?
I shall refrain myself from commenting on grammar and composition as in dreams everything is forgivable and acceptable.
Nasilsin Thunder, aferin, ustalik benim arkadas! I hope to be one of your friends. If I were you, I would ask her to marry me.
Haha is it a dream, Thunder? it is not finished yet, Ì will wait for the next story.