If the day would come when you no longer remember us,
if your eyes go blind, your ears deaf, and your lips don't have more words.
I will be your eyes to see, your ears to listen, your mouth to speak.
I will sing the songs for you if you don't remember their lyrics.
I will be as well our past, our presence, as also our future.
I will be your wife, your friend, your nurse, your chef.
Do not worry, don't be afraid, I will never leave, I will stay.
And if you need a lullaby as if you were a child, I will sing for you.
I will tenderly take you into my arms, kiss your cheeks and lips.
I will hold your hand and give you comfort if you are desperate.
If the day would come
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Royal Falcon, thanks so much. As you are an excellent poet, I do appreciate your comment very much.
I'll keep writing because I can't help writing when I get an idea for a good story or poem.
fatiha, thanks, for commenting on my blog. I always appreciate it.
Marek, thanks for your comment.
To answer your question, it a promise from a woman to her man.
I wrote how women usually think and act.
Maybe it's our nature.
We, women, have to accept our nature also if we are self-confident and independent in thinking, acting, and feeling.
In the end, we care.
I hope, and wish, we get the same care if we need.
Very well represented the 'ocean of emotions' of a WOMAN.................Woman, who can be a wife, a a friend, a nurse and the feeder.
Very nicely portrayed Rose.
awesome piece of writing,,,,, really poetry is made only through feelings,,,,,n its a great blessing,,,,u r bestowed wd,,,,, great work,, keep it up
Hi Rose,
It's just so beautiful, so sensitive, good heart never get old.
Who do you talk to?It seems you love this person very much.
No words are needed to describe this great love.
U are a real poet :) I sense this in ur words they flow like a river ur words come naturally it's ur ability to describe ur emotions to explain things in a beautiful and elegant way is poetry . Thus when any one read it here / she sigh saying " that's it "
U have described how 2 lovers stay together to the last moments . How do all women take care of their men when they grow older . It was very touching and true
Thanks for the 2 time :)
Thank you, Rosemary, I always appreciate your comments.
This is so poetic because the poem is fulk of very truthful sincere and honest emotions . I have really enjoyed reading them rose :) :) :)
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