I didn't know when I fell for her, but it was when I saw her in her office drowned in some thoughts, then I wished that she was thinking about me. It wasn't long before I was head over heels in love with her. I went to her table and ‘ahmmed” to get her out of thoughts. She raised her eyes, which shone over me. “What can I do for you?” She asked with. There was a slight curve on her lips, which reminded me of rose petals. I told her that I did not have any business with her, I just saw her from the glass wall and I did not know how my steps took me to her.
We became friends out of nothing. We spent a lot of time together and got along lovingly. After having passed a good part of my life I knew she was the one, and I was sure…….pretty sure, she knew I was the one, too because, one night while she was too closed to me, I popped up the question, which made her blush with joy and the following year we got hitched or you can say we tied the knot.
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Great use of all the idioms!
I'd add: 'the apple of your eye'.
Thanks Lady Anne for appreciation and necessary correction. I have amended my text accordingly. Thanks again.
mish nice way to use idioms, I like it
Wonderful love story. You really seemed destined to be together even from the first day you laid your eyes on her. I am 100% sure that your "togetherness" is still as strong as it was during your wedding day. May it continue to last forever.
I am more familiar with "tied the knot" than with "got hitched". I guess the latter is a slang.
If you don't mind, here's my correction:
***then I wished may that she was be thinking about me.
***It wasn't long before I was head over heels in love with her.
***which reminded me the of rose petals.
***After having passed a good part of my life I knew she was the one, and I’m I was sure…….pretty sure, she knew I was the one, too because, one night while she was too closed with to me, I popped up the question,
Of course helped was taken from collection.
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