I have not been active here for several months. This is mainly due to the fact that I moved to another city and settled down here. I constantly have new plans reborn, how to help others and myself in learning English, and I constantly do not have enough time to start realizing them with high quality.
This evening I was doing a task that sounds like this: Write a short but exciting story, beginning with the phrase "Jack was asleep in the chair, dreaming, when the phone rang ". I bring my essay to your attention. Please rate it. I tried to make an audio recording, but I do not know if it worked out and if my English is clear. Just in case, I will leave the text itself.
I also suggest that you compose a story that starts with the same phrase. Or let's start like a new game, with the same rules and different phrases for beginning?! I think it's interesting how different people do it. Don't worry, I won't use this for my own personal gain. This is just a part of my homework from the English course I am taking, and the completed assignment inspired me to start this blog.
Here's my story: Story.m4a
Jack was asleep in the chair, dreaming, when the phone rang. "Who would be it so late?"-he thought, and slowly began to move to the source of this sound. He couldn't move fast because of his injury in the spine after the car crash. Today his 60. He was guessing that somebody in the last hours of the holiday day wishes to congratulate him.
He didn't wrong. But for this time, this wasn't just the next one congratulation. It was his wife, the voice of which he hadn't heard for five years! It was the first dialogue after her entrance from a coma!
For a moment he returned thoughts to those terrible car crash but invaded happiness didn't let him to thought about it. He talked to her today's morning during a visit to the hospital, but she couldn't answer him. But now he heard her!
It was incredible! The best Birthday present of all his life!
The conversation was brief. Interlocutors were known what the best have to do. She already asked a doctor about her husband's late visit to her hospital room.
Thank you for your attention and participation!