Once upon a time, there’s a very rich man who by old age will soon die, he has one son who will be his only heir for all the wealth he gained for his lifetime. He knows that the time has come to leave the world, he asked his senior loyal servant to find his beloved son a wife, he instructed him to go back where he was born and look for a special maiden to marry his heir.

The loyal servant prayed to God to make his journey successful and show His kindness as a manifestation of a well-mannered lady on his way, “whoever will come and then I will ask her to give me a drink and let my horse to drink as well, will be the chosen one for my young master.” He said to his heart fervently. God heard the plea and sent his angel to guide the servant’s journey.

The time is noon when he reaches the town and prefers to stay to the nearest well, simultaneously, not so distant the angel blew the lady’s ear to make her think that it’s about time to go to the well with her jar to get some water.

When the servant sees the lady coming, he immediately asked her to give him a drink as well as his horse. The maiden did what he asked for and he watched her closely, the lady is a very beautiful woman and a virgin, no man had ever slept with her. The maiden’s family allowed him to take her home.

They arrived at the young master’s place. Winter is approaching, the snowflakes starting to pour on the ground. The young master had just finished meditation. As he stands he saw a very beautiful lady riding their horse with his senior loyal servant, the maiden sees the young master, almost in perfect physique and has an angelic face. The servant told the story of his journey and the young master brought the lady to his mother’s house to introduce her, and eventually, they got married and he loved her more than anything in the world, and he felt comforted after his mother died.


(Sorry Sir, my original concept is not really winter timing but still I tried my best to have a winter scene for this challenge, another apology; I bet this isn’t a 300 words piece. :D, my bad, about 361 words has been used. :D)


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  • Dear Frank! I didn't have any intention to offend our dear Risty. She knows my way and she appreciates my being outspoken and my humor. What I meant was mostly about language, her using wrong vocabulary and I believe she will agree with my corrections.

  • Thank you, Ate Ada! As always your putting smile to my face. :)

  • Thank you, Sir Dan! I’m not offended at all, however, I’m still waiting for your grammar corrections. You know, I won’t let you burst my cute bubbles…hahaha!

    First, it’s my wrong implication that the man thought of her as a virgin, actually, it’s me who is trying to convey the message, as the story teller. The senior servant is not telling himself that she is a virgin. It’s me, stating the observations. Hahaha!

    About the drink, Sir, sure I want to join your LOL for this, of course, that was just a TEST. Does that mean they really have to dry themselves and wait for someone to give some drink? It’s a test who is the right one.

    Hahaha! The angelic face can hardly call a man? Why so? Well, as my belief serves me right, there is NO woman angel. Only MAN. It’s only a matter of describing soft handsomeness.

    I second Frank, he doesn’t deserve a right woman? Why so?

    Lastly, this is to prove that your challenge was accepted, and I feel happy with what I wrote. Hahahahaha.


  • Thank you, Setareh! The girl is the perfect girl for him, God directed the love story. :)

  • Thank you so much, Frank, It’s nice to see you around and defend my story, highly commendable. Maybe you didn’t notice this is inspired by the love story in the Bible, it was the story of Rebecca and Isaac. How did they meet and indeed it’s magical. It was a story of kindness, acceptance, and blessings from God and from the lady herself.

    I truly appreciate the support you’ve shown. 

  • Thank you, Bet! It’s nice to see you here. :) 

  • Interesting story!

    Well written!

    Thanks for sharing sweetheart!

  • Well, my dear! What to say not to offend you! Hahaha! First, do you really think it is possible for a man to tell a virgine from a woman at the first sight? LOL!

    Then, if both a rider and a horse had some drink, they would hardly be able to get to their destination! LOL!

    I really doubt if we can say that any man has "an angelic face". If he does, he can hardly be called a man, especially if he meditates. He doesn't deserve a right woman.

    Sorry, dear! But it is just a piece of literature I don't like.

  • Dear Risty, I assume the girl has got a pure and kind heart that the angel chose her. Nice story, thanks for sharing.

  • Interesting story.....Risty!

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