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A Face of Friend.I see faces, they come and go. I hear sentences, words and letters, they are without sense and contents. I see pictures, they disintegrate to dust. I recognize hands, many hands, but

Posted by Fatimah on March 14, 2010
A Face of Friend.


I see faces,
they come and go.
I hear sentences, words and letters,
they are without sense and contents.
I see pictures,
they disintegrate to dust.
I recognize hands, many hands,
but I can’t catch them.
I feel coldness,
and find no warmth.
I experience grief, sorrow and pain,
and, nevertheless, can give no consolation.
I look into a deep abyss,
however, the abyss looks into me.
But, I see a bright light in the dark tunnel,
Faces, sentences, pictures, hands, warmth and consolation around it;
Friend, I love you!
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  • Siddh. December 12, 2011 5:03

    very nice

  • Fatimah March 31, 2011 5:04
    Thank you Tania for your nice comment. Your word made me feel confident to learn English  more better. Your word strengthen my feeling be more stronger.
  • tania March 30, 2011 16:40
    thanks a lot for your poem, Fatimah, it is so beautiful
  • SHIHA March 19, 2011 2:54

    Fathimaaa..

    PB SHELLEY's "Ode To West Wind" haunted me by reading ur optimistic poem.Really poetry,the mirror of life can through away the mental conflicts."if winter comes can spring be far behind"(shelley) the more celeberated line flashes through your " I see a bright light in the dark tunnel,
    Faces, sentences, pictures, hands, warmth and consolation around it;
    Friend, I love you!
    "

    thanks for warming ny heart. Flourish yor fruitfull pen 'n' paper

  • luth February 20, 2011 20:23
    What a beautiful poem.! Keep it up friend. You are great.
  • Achan Malaka February 13, 2011 12:01
    Great poem. It resembles affection to your beloved friends. Well done!!!
  • Sharifa Bahri (SkoonAlBahr) February 6, 2011 22:38

    I love you too :)

    What a nice poem you wrote !

    Thanks for sharing

    Skoon ....

  • Fatimah December 17, 2010 10:20

    My beloved grandmother

    a soft voice still sounded in my ears,
    the advice that meaningful
    come from a loving heart
    gently caress your hand
    on my hair, full of love

    but now all
    living memories of grief heart
    where are you now my beloved grandmother
    I will always remember
    all your advice
    like a lantern in my life

    Hopefully our paths will meet at the same edge
    My Best Regards to all the love you give
    On the whole  life you will be part of this heart

    Farewell, My beloved grandma

  • Fatimah August 6, 2010 4:38
    I grateful to you all who read this poem. This is the shaped of friend who come and go but this is a reality of life. I have to face with passionate and patience to every friend's face. Thank you.
  • Nadira August 1, 2010 5:57
    beautiful words of expressions . Compassionate and has essence in your words and feelings
    all the best in your poetry
    nadira
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