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All seasons are gone

when I felt the surroundings

I wasn't asleep

, awake nor done

lost among five seasons

the fifth was my dream

going inside rings


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  • I wonder if  the words  composed  are  of the  final stage in life  being  senile

     

  • Ohnie,

    Yes, all what you have said is true and clear.

    If you have noticed, I did not talk about dreams themselves but the season of the dream, it is among all other seasons ; has no time no place no certain weather.

    Thank you for your lovely clear crystal spirit.

  • When I'm day dreaming that means I'm awake...just that my thoughts are somewhere else where I want them to be.  I am in the world where I have complete control of my fantasies...what I want to happen...whom I wanna be there with me...when I wanna go back to reality.  In short, I become the master.  So, I won't say that I'm lost there.  But when I'm dreaming while sleeping, anything goes and I have no control over whatsoever is happening in my dreams.  Meaning, I'm nothing but a slave there.  Also, most of the time, out of so many dreams we have each night, we only remember but one, if we get unlucky, we remember nothing at all when we wake up.

    Not sure if I've answered your question properly. (^_*) 

  • Ohnie,

    Thank for your comment dear,

    when we go in a daydream what do we feel?

  • Interesting, Fa.  But I too am lost.  If you're not asleep, not awake, not done...then what are you? Perhaps, I need a little enlightenment.

  • Ymn Pearl,

    I like girls who are peaceful,

  • siriA,

    Your presence is anther flower in a bouquet.

      Thank you for being here.

  • anele,

    Well, I said not fair but I never said I will never reveal the title.

    Anyway, the fifth season is not fixed by a date, it is moving around our feelings trying to figure out which is which.

  • T.L.B, I do agree. :))

  • anele,

    Oh, long time missing such food, always in-time.

    *

    for me, it is the season of having frozen feelings not expired yet.

    **

    (It's better to savor the sweet pain that no one has inflicted on you...)

    Yes, moreover, it is not only better but a must, so you put your foot in someone's shoes.

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