O world, where is your promise
Which pushes me to cross boundaries
I wish No farewell for my lovers
The dreams, lure me to always draw
A perfect picture all my life through
With great alacrity without being tough
Since I hold my feather closing my eyes
the dreams in my mind flies
and becomes only part of memories
World revolves like a gyre
all things appear to be a mire
one must achieve one’s aims alone
but how to forsake smiles which I can’t do without
no warm feeling means no life
how can we open an oyster without a knife
why do you lie in granting happiness!
and make life a pool of sadness
O world, where is your promise
I can’t say no farewell for my lovers.
About the poem: This poem refers to my old days (not that old) while I was studying faraway form my beloved family. I wrote the poem when I visited them and then I was about leaving them again to complete my studying. I wrote it in the same day of the farewell day. :")
I have published the poem in a newspaper. My teacher has modified it as well.
Comments
WOW AMAZING
A very sophisticated poem for someone who claims to be intermediate level lol
@Fa, Thanks for dropping by.
Such a poet liked my simple words means a lot to me. :)
Great feelings of mixed emotions, I like it really very much.
Thanks
YAY! :D :D
Thanks sweetie! <3 :)
Wow :O
Cool stuff Ymn... Like it! ;)
Thanks Syubidupapap! =))
Yes, I have taken it by myself. I's so happy you like it. ^^
Great poem!
But I notice another thing. The photo. It is also a great one, andddd it has your name on it. Did you take it by yourself?
YAY! Thanks Yasemin.. *blushing*
By the way, your name is like my friend's name.. :D so BEST REGARD
Wow! Yeah, it really deserves to be published :)
Thanks!
:)