It was a hot summer night, Someone knocked the door, on our simple bungalow house, I opened the door, I saw a dirty clothed ,very old woman in our wooden simple door. I am exhaustively hungry! she said. Please come in, and I will give you food to eat, I said. I cooked food for her, My specialty, a crispy spicy delicious fried chicken. I gave her also our native smoking hot brown rice.

After she ate my special spicy delicious food. I told her to stay over in our house for a night, outside is not safe, I said, because on the midnight of hot weathered summer last year, they were two young drunk men killed by a pack of hungry fiercely wolves, in our small isolated village.

The very old woman stranger, stayed her night in our simple bungalow home. At dawn, of a hot summer day. I checked her and she was gone on her bed.

I found a rusty antic metal, small box on her bed where she slept, with a piece of a small colored, brown paper behind the small box. I took the paper with curiosity and It has a letter, said, "because your been so kind to me, I give you this box as your reward".

I opened the rusty antic small box, I heard a shimmering water voice around said " You can now make a wish you like and I will grant that wish". I was extremely terrified man that time, the cold atmosphere, burst of strong wind, was an explainable.

In an hour little by little I felt calmed. Talked to my self, Ohhh Yes! I can now tell my  wish that I like. I am about to give my wish, but I woke up, Oh no! It is not true, "I am only dreaming".

It was a great blissful dreamed, but I was not satisfied, the ending was not complete.

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  • hahaha lovely!

    I often dream about some fascinating things and end up waking huh! 

    :)

  • Thanks for taking this adjective challenge. 

    I really enjoyed the paragraph in which you were trying to open the mysterious box. You could have written that part even more better, though. 

  • Shooottttt! I thought it was real, and wanted to know what you wished for. LOL. Nice blog, Jesson.

  • Jess, good try and great u took part in this challenge. One tip, focus on comma and sentence structure, check this:

    It was a hot summer night. Someone knocked on the door of our simple bungalow house. I opened the door and saw a dirty clothed, very old woman in the door. (I guess here to say OUR WOODEN door is not such a good idea, it is obvious that the door belong to you :-D)

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