I honored 'love' and never complained.
I cried hard inside, never let the tear roll out.
It was a very harsh storm, tried very hard
to reach the bank, but it seemed to far.
I convinced and convinced my love,
Indifference only I found.
When she got ready to hear,
I could not say a word.
I didn't ask for the entire eden, all the springs
I wished just for a single flower of love
but could not find.
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Thanks you saba for all appreciations.
You are always welcome, Mishaikh. Don't mention it.
Rose: Advised correction has been made. Thanks.
Meanwhile I will appreciate a few word commenting on the video I have recently posted. Thanks.
Mishaikh,
if you don't mind, I would suggest you a correction of a little spelling mistake you have made in the fourth line of your writing.
Shouldn't it be it seemed too instead of seed to?
O.M.
Simple explanation of love: Respecting each other's ego.
Thanks for your kind explanation.
Very rightly said Rose. Thanks for your kind attention as always.
I just wonder to know if anybody knows what love is? I guess each person in this world has his/her own concept of love and there are only several commons of them for everyone. Some wise teachers even say that we do not need to be loved, cos all love is inside of us. Well...one I know exactly...love shouldn't be painful, otherwise we are in love with a wrong person. It has to bring happiness. No matter where it comes from.
Nice words, as usual, Mishaikh.
Mishaikh,
Although we always seek for love, love follows its own will.
Love does not want to be found by us. Love wants finding us.
If it is the right time, love will find us, surprise us, and makes us happy forever.
Thanks once more for a lovely poem written by you.