Hello Everyone! Welcome to the Blog Train! Today is May 6th at 6am in China.
In case you don't know what a blog train is, I will tell you. A Blog Train is where one person starts a story and others add to it. Not comment on it, but ADD TO IT.
For instance, I would start a story. The title of the story is "Mary had a Little Lamb".
I will start: Mary had a little lamb.
Another person might add: Mary and her lamb lived on a farm outside of a small town.
The next person might add: Everyday Mary and her lamb would walk to the pond.
And the next might say: Along the way, she would stop and smell the flowers and watch the butterflies playing in the field.
And so on, and so on. Soon you have a story.
Would you like to try? Come on, let's get started. We will do this blog train for just one day and see where it takes us. Try to make your sentences sound as native English as you can. Think in English. At the end we can help each other by commenting or making suggestions for ways to write better (that is if we need to).
Rules are simple. Each person may add one sentence to the story.
Ready? Let's go! Remember! Do not comment on what is already written. Just add another sentence.
Started by Vanessa. "Sally and Her Dog" Sally has a dog and his name is Rover.
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Hello Everyone! The Blog Train has reached the end of its journey!
Today is May 7th at 6am in China.
My, my, my...What happened to our story? Lets take a look. Let's ask a couple of questions shall we?
Did the story stick to the topic well?
Are there any spelling errors? What about puncuation? Is that correct?
Were the idioms used properly (if there were any)?
How do you feel about the story that was created?
Please answer the questions above. Use the sentence number to comment on that sentence.
Here is the complete story.
Sally and Her Dog.
1. Sally has a dog and his name is Rover.
2. Rover is a "handsome" dog, "he" has a pretty girlfriend named MM.
3. Rover and MM are inseparable, but Rover is a mongrel whereas MM is a pure bred.
4. but, they made for each other.
5. One day, they are at the beach hanging out together
6. But Sally doesn't like Rover's friendship with MM as she has the strong reason for her dislike.
7. Because MM was the brithday gift by her ex-boyfriend, and it often reminds her of her ex.
8. It has been a long time since Sally adopted Rover. Now, Rover is quite old and lost a few teeth in lower jaw.
9. Sally was a practical girl, so she collecte the teeth Rover had lost and made herself a fancy neckless, but people started thinking that she was a bit queer, so she gave the neckless as a gift to the local witchdoctor.
10. The local witchdoctor felt extremely excited when he received the gift from Sally. It's the first time, he got dog's teeth. After Sally left, he was back into house straight away and started going round and round and ransacking his brain how to use them effective. Suddenly, he put a finger into his mouth, he lost a front tooth in a car accident last year.
The local witchdoctor felt extremely excited when he received the gift from Sally. It's the first time, he got dog's teeth. After Sally left, he was back into house straight away and started going round and round and ransacking his brain how to use them effective. Suddenly, he put a finger into his mouth, he lost a front tooth in a car accident last year.
It has been a long time since Sally adopted Rover. Now, Rover is quite old and lost a few teeth in lower jaw.
(sorry, I am thinking of my dog when typing this comment :)))
Because MM was the brithday gift by her ex-boyfriend, and it often reminds her of her ex.
But Sally doesn't like Rover's friendship with MM as she has the strong reason for her dislike.
Rover and MM are inseparable, but Rover is a mongrel whereas MM is a pure bred.
Rover is a "handsome" dog, "he" has a pretty girlfriend named MM.