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Posted by zaibi on February 15, 2010

Friend

I was sitting alone,

Suddenly, I felt

Someone is looking at me,

I felt shy, shy and shy,

After sometime I

When I started looking quaintly,

I felt there was no one near to me

I looked around many a times but could not find any one

At last I looked into the sky

The moon was looking at me

I just asked him to come down to me

It refused, refused and continued to refuse,

It said I am engaged with someone

I am engaged with someone,

I am engaged with someone

I start walking with my head down

Then I realize

And I saw

I am not walking alone

The moon is walking along with me

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Aouatif April 3, 2010 15:43

I like your poeme and i wish you a good continuation and also dont feel alone because all your friends with you :)
Sara April 2, 2010 11:09

very very niiiiice ..
the moon is Engaged with me
Yas March 31, 2010 13:13

it was realy good somhowe funny;keep going u can do it!
Alexa March 27, 2010 13:24

it's an awesome poem...plz tell me when u write another one x
daisy March 26, 2010 15:11

oh zebaish this is very good poem.actually i dont like read and listen to poem but really i like your poem.i wish your successfull go on always.you are good poet in my opinion.
Afsan Aria March 25, 2010 12:33

It's very nice. It makes me feel romantic.
shilpashruti March 25, 2010 12:24

Nice Lines.. I lyked it...thanks for sharing... keep going...
Nebia February 26, 2010 9:23

Don't stay alone any more! be courageous and look for happiness yourself.
Sure there is a person who feels lonly like you waiting her happy moments ....
I hope you will write soon telling you are not lonely no more!
ehsan February 26, 2010 7:15

"The moon is walking along with me "
pretty good !
I enjoyed it
Atika February 26, 2010 6:56

beeing alone can be sometimes good ,but most of the time it will make you sad,
i hope that we will be surrounded by great friends ,and sweet family.
for the poeme,very nice .We are waiting for another one !!!!thanks for sharing