A Sweet Little Love Story!!

ONCE UPON A TIME THERE WAS 'US';

We met, we smiled, we laughed, we shared, we cried, we fought, we loved, we struggled and one day we separated, but our hearts never stopped beating for each other. We struggled, we loved, we fought, we shared, we laughed, we smiled, we met; just became the part of our memory and we cried, but all we could do was sacrifice, compromise on our feelings.

P.S; I wrote this story maybe a few years ago, when I came across a movie (I don't remember the name of the movie I'm bad at memorizing the names sorry) in which the  couple shared a good chemistry and because of some misunderstandings they parted from each other; yet they had strong feelings for one another. The compromised on their feelings because of their ego or self-pride.

The story touched me and I tried to reflect what their relationship was with one another.

There is a quote too, which I wrote for the same story;

"Is the silence making us apart; or the misunderstandings taking their part."

Hope you would like it.

Regards,

Anah Sid!

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  • "Is the silence making us apart; or the misunderstandings taking their part."

    Sometimes we need to part ways from the person who are dear to us not because the love isn't there but we have to do it for us not to get hurt. Some says if you really love someone you have to fight for your love, but what if that love only give you more pain than happiness and peace of mind? Would you still stay? People especially those who deeply in love don't realize their worth and leave their ego and pride behind for the one they love, others keep their ego but it makes gap between them and their partner. Both sides have negative effect, so I think that we should know how to balance it to keep the relationship strong. Communication is always the key to avoid misunderstanding, one should open up with their partner if they have conflict and try to talk about it, not just to assume things that makes the conflicts more worst and might lead to fights and separation. One should swallow his/her ego and pride to make it all work, but you have to know your limitations also, to keep your self respect.

    Your blog touches me, I like every word of it. Keep it up! God bless!
  • Excellent!

    People do part from each other - sometimes it hurts, though. 

  • Oh, Rusty you are at a right point. We have to be optimistic in life. Love, hate, fights everything is the part of life which is based on reality. People separate and rejoin, miracle happens in everyone's life. And there is always happy ending, it's just human can't tackle the reality that everything happens for a good reason. I wish my story has a happy ending too. :D 

  • Sometimes we get stuck at a moment in our life anah , people expect happy couple not to fight in reality it's otherwise , they fight sometimes they even separate and get hurt but their hearts heal and love overcome and maybe even your story have a happy ending that just didn't happen yet :D .

  • Saterah dear, thanks for admiring. :D

  • Oh dear Anash, you have written it so beautifully. I like it. Thanks for sharing.
  • I'm fine Dara Sir, you are certainly right everyone need love, we need love but our egos sometimes get bigger than everything and ruin us. 

    Thanks for stopping by!

  • Kiya haal hain Anah Siddiqui. Me nahi pata, lakin koi be dunya piar manta. I have said this many times Anah, we need love in our life. 

  • Yeah, Rusty, it's pretty realistic as it happens among couples. And I really can't stand such things. It touched me and I wrote what I felt. The story was written in 2010 and the quote was written in 2014. Lol, there is a long gap but the essence of the story didn't vanish from my mind and heart!

    Thanks for admiring! :D

  • Once upon a time there was a Blog I read and it was amazing , I guess they could use some these words for a new movie . I think that the story is realistic and very romantic , really amazing             Well done :D

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