A Cake

A foreign language is like a little dragon living in your mind.
Even if you feed him every day, it will always be hungry.
I guess it's better to kill him.
But my heart's too weak to do that, so it is still with me.
Now we put the second candle in its cake.


((My English book ;)

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  • Hi my friend,
    I wrote about a foreign language like a little Dragon, because 
    When it's hungry, he puffs his flames inside me, for pushing me to do the impossible things.

     And when it's satisfied. It becomes nice like sea breezes, raising me at the top of the world. Isn't it the nice feeling ;)

     I know it's weird , but that what I came up with . I also love it ,but sometimes it's bothering me , as you know I am still a learner on this sea.

    Thank you Alyeta for your comment :)
  • Oh, thank you Dimas for a nice comment.
    And I'll do my best;)

    Thank you bro for sharing your thoughts in this I am really appreciate it :)

    Thank you Anele for your comment.
    Yeah unfortunately I have a weak heart :)

    my little Dragon is a very powerful myth. I'll keep it for making another cake with a new candle..
  • Your heart is too weak to do it!  Wow, you must be thankful to your heart.  Otherwise, you won't have this determination to learn that foreign language.

    Hoping that more candles ahead will be put on your cake... Don't ever give up!

  • I would prefer to symbolize it with a plant rather than a dragon. As a plant needs a constant care to grow, a language also needs a consistancy of a learner.

    I would also prefer it to represent a "learning of language" as 'Love' because you never feel any "boredom" (boring) in love, instead you give more and more care to your lover so language is like a lover too.

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