Everybody is running

Everybody is in rush

Everybody is chasing

Everybody is running.....

........................................

I don't know what is there

You don't know what is there

Nobody knows it

but everybody is running......

.........................................

I also want it

you also want it

nobody don't want it

and everybody is running for it.....

.........................................

I don't know where we are running

you also don't know where are we running

Nobody knows it

but everybody running....

......................................

Somebody reached before me

somebody is behind me

sure everybody will reach their.

What is it?

...............Our graveyard...................

* it is my attempt to write a poem....Please help me by giving your valuable feedback

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Comment by Luci on November 25, 2017 at 14:41

It is cool - riddle poem, ap suku...  and hahaaaaaaa firstly I thought it would be maybe orgasm lmao as they both were running but then I changed and thought it would be DEATH and was close...so m not that stupid haha :D I like it, indeed!


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Comment by Onee-chan on November 25, 2017 at 13:54
I like it, apsuku
Comment by Rosemary :) on November 25, 2017 at 9:12

Mmmmmm Do u mean ? That when it's time for death . We feel the shortness of life . Ur poem is good I like it's idea and rhythm . But. I am still wondering. Dose represents life fast style only ???
And why did u mentioned the graveyard at the end ????

Comment by Roman on November 24, 2017 at 23:10

Hi ap suku! Nice poem, but I think that also nobody can stop running:)

Comment by Halima on November 24, 2017 at 19:26

hello. nice topic . reality . but this repetition. is it just to achieve cohesion?


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