Unforgettable trip to north (Writing challenge by Musky)

Men and women are dying in Karachi because of intense hot weather in last summer. Me and my friend decided to go any other place to spend our summer vacations, so we move to northern site of Pakistan that Area had a pleasant weather in summer.   

We are travel by bus between Karachi to Rawalpindi we saw a girl, She set on chair; I can’t express her pulchritude in words even now whenever I think about her I feel difficult to convince myself that she was from this planet. To remember that moment is a happier and more comely time for me even now.

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Comment by bet on August 20, 2017 at 5:07

Nice!

Comment by Evangelina on August 18, 2017 at 20:38
Gulzar,

Nice and sweet little story.

Thank you for sharing.
Comment by BS on August 18, 2017 at 18:43

Well done :)) 

Comment by Muskan on August 17, 2017 at 15:24

Wow!! you used them perfectly. To tell you how perfect you were, the closest word in Urdu for comely is nazuk. Nazuk lamha means comely moment or time as you used. Great job Gulzar :) Thank you for participation. 

Comment by Roman on August 17, 2017 at 14:38

Good story, Gulzar Hussain! Thank you for sharing!

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