Danny's Writing Challenge: a Short Funny Story

WEEKEND DIALOG with A FRIEND

ME: I can't take it anymore. I know I still have many things to do. But just today, let me rest my brain.

FRIEND: What?? NO!!! You don't need to do that. If you feel that dizzy, you could remove your head and put it on the table. When you feel any better, you can reset it again.

ME: I can't believe that you'd have such a great advice. But please, excuse your stupid unconscious friend! Can you help me do that?

FRIEND: Of course. You can have a rest here in your comfortable bed. I will take care of your head and won't let it alone. There are crowds of turkeys on the table will accompany you.

ME: Oh, thank you so much, my friend. You're the best friend I ever had. :D

(She is helping me remove my head and is still talking to me as I am so nervous)

FRIEND: Oh My God! I didn't think your head is so heavy. Your forehead is scorched and darkened. Is your pain that great?

ME: You see. You now must have understood why I wanted to rest my brain. Hoo....

(She walks while her two hands are holding my head, but ..... after holding the heavy head for a little while, she feels her arms become numb and she drops them on the floor)

FRIEND: I'm sorry, my friend. I've tried my best.

// I can't imagine the next story.........LOL........Please imagine yourself OR maybe you have an idea. Please write in the comment. ^^ Thank you. //

Continuation dialog from Roman

FRIEND: I'm sorry, my friend. I've tried my best. Let me pick up your brain with my legs. But you know, it is not easy for me to do that.

ME: Ok, take your time. But after that, bring me please my cat. My brain is relaxing faster when my cat is lying close to me.

* * * * *

The first two lines were real dialogue with my friend. We just have a great sense of humor. :D And ONCE, about a month ago, my forehead really looked scorched and darkened after I had given it aromatherapy oil. It was when I had a severe headache. LOL.... I thought "Oh God, I found that my brain may get burnt by a lot of work". I had been sleepless those weeks, so the best panacea was sleeping more. I also treated the wound with bee oil for a quick recovery. LOL.

Thank you so much for spending your time to read my blog. ^_^

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Comment by Onee-chan 7 hours ago

Thank you, Mishaikh, for your good and encouraging comment. ^^

Comment by Mishaikh 20 hours ago

Very funny.  Good sense of humor.  Your way of writing is attractive.  Keep it up.


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Comment by Onee-chan on December 5, 2017 at 15:53

Thanks, Mishaikh and Ella for liking the story. ^^

Thanks, Teacher Dan and Roman for your reply. ^^

Comment by Roman on December 2, 2017 at 23:18
Thank you both too:)
Comment by Danny Clark on December 2, 2017 at 14:52

Dear, Ec is a great source of my inspiration! I am posting a new blog now! Hope you will like it, too!


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Comment by Onee-chan on December 2, 2017 at 14:47

Okay, Teacher. Yup, I corrected myself, always confused about words. ^_^

I often forget about help+V1. hehe...

I hope I don't disappoint you for not getting any food here. ^^ Foraging on comments is a good idea. ^_^ :D

Thank you so much for your interesting challenge. :)

Comment by Danny Clark on December 2, 2017 at 14:18

Dear, to REMOVE and to reset a head sounds much better that to RELEASE it. I read your story early morning. I was late to tell you as you had corrected it yourself. Look, what I can correct is this sentence

"She is helping me remove my head___ still talking to me as I am so nervous"


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Comment by Onee-chan on December 2, 2017 at 13:41

Roman, :) :D

Rose, thank you. I'm glad you like it. ^_^

Danny Teacher, :D Thank you, Sir. This was inspired by real dialogue with a friend. I just improved it a bit. :D

At first, I doubted using some verbs and phrasal verbs, but I changed it again and again, until you read it. :D

I know that I make it even not real. How can a head be removed...? kekeke.... I don't have idea to make the story in paragraph and this is the result. ^^ Thank you so much for your nice words. Agree with you, I also like Roman's continuation. ^_^

Comment by Danny Clark on December 2, 2017 at 13:26

Onee, I don't really know how to correct your story! Hahaha!

Comment by Danny Clark on December 2, 2017 at 13:22

Hahaha! Nice, smart and funny! Thank you, dear! I also like Roman's continuation! It is great! Thank you both!

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