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Once upon a time there was a young man. During that time parents chose brides and grooms for their children. So, one day Zimi's parents chose a girl as his bride. But zimi was not happy with it as he wanted to choose someone himself.

Finally, the wedding day came. Zimi put his wedding clothing sulkily, ate almost nothing, did not laugh! His mother watched him and asked but Zimi did not share anything.

Later wedding took place and having been married they went to a place near a mountain. Having arrived without saying anything Zimi went to the mountain. There he sat under a fig tree and after a while fell into sleep.

But in the midst of his sleep he woke up having heard a sweet chirping. He opened his eyes and saw a yellow little bird beside him. He felt something and started thinking that the beautiful bird was asking him to go back to the valley.

pictures of spring এর চিত্র ফলাফল

And, when he got back he became dumbfounded to see her beautiful bride in the greenish flowery valley. When he heard her voice he became enchanted and found it so sweet. Literally she was dazzling in the late evening's slanting sun.

সম্পর্কিত চিত্র

Then they walked together, laughed and sang together...being spellbound by the lovely spring!

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Comment by Risty on April 27, 2017 at 7:35

Hi there, Bet!

 

I think this is a real life story, some areas really do this kind of marriage, parents will choose. The other half is life a hidden thing inside a black box. You have no idea if they are pleasing or loathsome. So glad, you did it with happy ending.

 

Thanks for sharing this to us. 

Comment by Kal on April 23, 2017 at 18:21

Dear bet,

So nice story. I’m thankful you to made a lovely ending. I like it very much. It's Short, but sweet effort. WELLDONE!

Comment by Icha on April 23, 2017 at 10:54

Hi Bet,

Your story is simple but beautiful. I liked it. From your blog I can learn English as well by correction from Danny. Thanks you have shared it with us. 

Comment by bet on April 23, 2017 at 6:11

why not having been married why having got married...now I know having got means after the marriage but then where do you use having been?

Comment by bet on April 23, 2017 at 6:09

why not during, Danny?

Comment by Marshaa on April 22, 2017 at 19:25

very well writing, thanks bet.

Comment by Rosemary on April 22, 2017 at 17:23

A happily ever after story ending :) thanks for sharing dear bet

Comment by moonlight on April 21, 2017 at 5:36
Iam wondering to think that what would happen, if he saw unexpected face and voice!
Comment by bet on April 20, 2017 at 15:05
Thanks a lot.
Comment by Danny Clark on April 20, 2017 at 14:38

Well, here are my corrections again

Once upon a time there was a young man. At that time (In those days) parents chose brides and grooms for their children. So, one day Zimi's parents chose a girl as his bride. But Zimi was not happy with it as he wanted to choose someone himself.

Finally, the wedding day came. Zimi sulkily put on his wedding clothing, ate almost nothing and was unsmiling! His mother watched him and asked but Zimi did not say anything.

Later, the wedding took place and having got married they went to a place near a mountain. Having arrived there Zimi went to the mountain without saying anything. There he sat under a fig tree and after a while fell asleep.

But in the midst of his sleep he woke up having heard a sweet chirping. He opened his eyes and saw a yellow small bird beside him. He felt something and started thinking that the beautiful bird was asking him to go back to the valley.

And, when he got back he was dumbfounded to see his beautiful bride in the green__ flowery valley. When he heard her voice he was enchanted and found it so sweet. Literally she was dazzling in the late evening_ slanting sunrays.

Then they walked together, laughed and sang together...being spellbound by the lovely spring!

 

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