If I  see you, 
I will drown in your deep eyes 
How would I drown in dreams any more.............. 

If I  hear you, 
I will be spellbound of the song of nature in your tone 
I will long to your sweet silence again more and more............... 

If I can reach you, 
I will turn  crazy 
Believe me, you will need my mind too for sure.............. 

If I can be with you, 
I will enjoy melting down with your heat 
After the melting, 
Materials lose the sense of any more heat,
longing, passions, patience, 
their bitter sweetness might become sore............... 

Uniting or parting,,,
no matter, just keep the beat 
Ecstasy of uniting, agony of parting 
no matter, just keep the heart heat glowing and pure............ 

Repeat post (out of memory)

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Comment by Mishaikh on Saturday

LOL SNR, just enjoy, do not comprehend. To understand such emotions one to get imbibed with. Thanks anyway.

Comment by SNR on Saturday

I cannot comprehend poems easily. I read it twice, a nice poem articulating the feelings and restlessness of a distant lover I guess. 

Thanks for sharing this poem :D

Comment by Mishaikh on Saturday
Thanks onee for all appreciation!

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Comment by Mishaikh on Friday

Thanks Nadiyah for appraisal!

Comment by Mishaikh on Friday

Roman: I think every lover should have to react in this way to impress his/her beloved.

Thanks for your appreciation.

Comment by Mishaikh on Friday

Rose: Thank for your definition on "emotions".  It makes me happy you like the writing.

Comment by Mishaikh on Friday

ella thanks for appreciating gesture. 

Dara, thanks for your time to read and comment in your unique way.

Rosemary: I am glad you like the poem.  Thanks for encouragement. 

Comment by Nadiyah on Friday

A very nice piece of writing, keep it up

Comment by Roman on Thursday

Hi Mishaikh!

I hope you read these words to your beloved :)

Your poem is nice! It warms up! :)

What a good, weird and interesting thing "love" that makes people feel such deep and strong emotions!

Also I like the last paragraph, especially the words "extesy or uniting and agony of parting"

Thanl you for sharing!

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