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Hello all,

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I have a sentence for you and you have to make a story from this sentence. Just use your imagination and the word limit is 100 words including my initial sentence.

Clear?

The sentence is:

I have been waiting for his / her for 10 years but when I came to know that ...

Good luck guys!

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Hahaha, 50 words as limit are not many words for a good story. It's only enough for few sentences and for the beginning of an interesting story because there will be still a secret how the story ends.
Here is my attempt... ( maybe is it a good idea for the next challenge when one after the other writes the next sentences of a common story.... it's just a proposal.)

Here is my 50 words story:

I have been waiting for his arrival for 10 years but when I came to know that he wasn't the person as I expected, I saw how foolish my waiting had been. I told him, "Get lost! ", and I went. It was a teaching for life I'll never forget.

Rose,

It is now 100 words!

)

Awesome story by the way!!!

Seeker said:

Rose,

It is now 100 words!

)

   I know  that all our love story was an  illusionment   . Like all men on the earth he was  using me  it is bad but I was a doll for his pleasures  and lust  , nothing more than that for him . I was suffering  and instead of taking  the right path  . I have got a stray  . When we first met 10 years ago  . I was a naive 20 girl  , who , was lost inside her family  house  . Ur fake love was my shelter   . Let me admit   , that u have helped me a lot to pass over my pains  , and that u have healed my wounds  . But it wasn't  u it was me  . I gave u my heart and passionate  . U have done it u have plucked  the Rose and after smelling it  . U threw  it away  without minding   , where ? When ? How ? Did u get it !!

   Sorry  , my old love  sorry for a million  times  . I am not ur toy any longer  . I learned  the lesson  the hard way  . Surely  I was deprived  from love and care  but I won't be any one .......  for the rest of my life  . Go there  many other women and girls  out there  . Who are ready for men like u . I don't hate  , I just don't want to meet people who have had made me miserable   

Seeker  :) it is ur turn to count now . Coz I have counted the first lines  and I can't do it any more :D  hhhhhhhhh 

Ok, I got it now and here is my 100 words story

I have been waiting for his arrival for 10 years but when I came to know that he wasn't the person as I expected, I saw how foolish my waiting had been. I told him, "Get lost! ", and I went. It was a teaching for life I'll never forget.
He had been my youthful love and my memory had played a bad and wrong game with me, so I'm thinking now. After some days of his arrival, I had to recognize him as a Casanova, a Womanizer. Thank God, I realized it very quickly and chased him away.


Seeker said:

Awesome story by the way!!!

Seeker said:

Rose,

It is now 100 words!

)

When i was kid i had one friend. To be honest it wasn't close friend, just one, whom i knew. We very rarely played together but it happened. And once we argued because of some trifle and fought. Then it seemed important and after fight i was angry on him and he was angry on me. I have already forgot it, as i forgot the reason of our fight. But deep inside me, i have been waiting for his appology for 10 years. But when I came to know, that he became priest... My 10 years old anger vanished and now we are just good friends.

You go, girl.

Rose said:

Hahaha, 50 words as limit are not many words for a good story. It's only enough for few sentences and for the beginning of an interesting story because there will be still a secret how the story ends.
Here is my attempt... ( maybe is it a good idea for the next challenge when one after the other writes the next sentences of a common story.... it's just a proposal.)

Here is my 50 words story:

I have been waiting for his arrival for 10 years but when I came to know that he wasn't the person as I expected, I saw how foolish my waiting had been. I told him, "Get lost! ", and I went. It was a teaching for life I'll never forget.

Ten years?

Seeker,

Here is mine,

"... I have been waiting for him for 10 years but when I came to know that ... he had passed away recently because of critical disease, my world turned colorless and my heart broke. How? Why, did I let my stubbornness and pride come in between us? Because of a meaningless issue that turned out to be so pointless. My regret was so deep, that I felt it could be better to be death."

Message;

Never let pride come in between a relationship.

Sorry, story turned out a little dramatic.

Hello, Seeker!

Here is my story!

I have been waiting for her for 10 years but when I came to know that she did not want me to see her face which had worsened from a viral disease. I tried to meet her many times but she was ignoring me. She wanted to be alone only. She never opened the door whenever she found me knocking on her door. Finally, I decided not to move from her home gate and I kept standing there for two days, she came out and started shouting at me, I saw her, this time she is looking prettier than before. She looks prettier when she shouts. I hugged her but she warned me of her viral disease. I replied, ‘I want your disease’. She got emotional and cried. After a few days later we got married. 

Tag: Correction. 

wow! what an amazing story you have made, Evan. I was about to delete this forum as I felt people are not interested in this activity, but now this activity is meaningful since you have participated here. )

Evangelina said:

Seeker,

Here is mine,

"... I have been waiting for him for 10 years but when I came to know that ... he had passed away recently because of critical disease, my world turned colorless and my heart broke. How? Why, did I let my stubbornness and pride come in between us? Because of a meaningless issue that turned out to be so pointless. My regret was so deep, that I felt it could be better to be death."

Message;

Never let pride come in between a relationship.

Sorry, story turned out a little dramatic.

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